Improve my essay for final draft

it’s an argument essay, and if u want know details, plz check last one I posted two days ago, and now I need this essay be perfect, add some more and ATTENTION     I need to show more and talk more about the Last pargraph, the ” Research shows education and low birth rate correlates.”  get some example for this one. And let the conclusion feel better, that’s all

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