the essay is about shopping mall. there are few point that i wanna talk about: 1) base on the location of the shopping mall, according to the citizen around to design the shopping mall, and different brand of the stores. 2) interesting or wonderful design of the shopping mall will attract customers. 3)multifunctional shopping mall 4)how to let people that spend a whole day in the shopping mall
you can also talk about other things that instead of mine. there is one source that show in word file “the death of shopping mall”, you also need to look for two more sources.
a clear thesis, three point of views in the body paragraphs